I was
born on October 9th 1997. My parents take a good care of me and I am really
grateful to have them. They give me love and knowledge. I try my best to make
them proud. On August 2008 my sister was married and I was really happy to see
her with a white dress and big smile. She looked so pretty. My brother and I
sang a song on that day. We enjoyed the party and the food.
The next
event is when I came to Junior High School. I had studied in Jakarta, and then
moved to Surabaya. I studied at Stella Maris Junior High School and I was
nervous because it had been three years since I came back to Surabaya. On the
first day of MOS. MOS is the school activity to introduce the school system or
building to a new students. I met a friend. Her name was Deborah. She did not
know anyone too, so she made friend with me.
After
graduating from Junior High School, I went to Stella Maris Senior High School.
It turned out that I went to a different class with all my friends from Junior
High, so I had to search for new friends, I found five people that really
match for tastes and hobbies with me, their name were Meliana, Sonia, Angelia,
Debra, and Lisa. We can communicate well and it made me happy to go anywhere
with them. I am still in contact with them until now. We hang out together when
he have a free time.
That is a
picture of us when we went to Tunjungan Plaza a few months ago.
When I
was in Junior High School, I used to be lazy and all of my friend is the same,
that was why my score was not too good. In High School, I came out to a class
which every student there is smart and diligent. It is hard at first and I
almost be the last person in the class. When I was down, my friends helped me
with my study. We studied together and we made a group in a social media to
talk about all the assignment and homework. They taught me about a subject that
I did not know and so did I. In the end I passed my final exam with good grades.
That was all thanks to them who support and helped me.
I think
life could not get any better and my thought was right. In the second year I
had to go to a different class. I think that two or one of my friend would be
with me but I was wrong. They went to same class and I am all alone. I asked
the academic adviser to moved me to their class, but she said that I would be
really loud and it would distract my score and all of my friends score. I cried
when she said that and Meliana said that it was okay and she said that she
would go to my class in the break time. One day, two days until one week, she
and I ate together in canteen but the other did not. I became really close with
Meliana. I am getting used to it after some time and Meliana started to get
close to Tirta because she thought that she was not really accepted in the
group. I learned to be independent and responsible on doing my assignment and
my studied. I realised that no one can help you except yourself.
Yes that is so true that the only person who can help yourself is you and being independent is really important. Good writing but there are some minor mistakes such as "when I am down", you need to revise it with "when I was down" and then the sentence "they are all go to the same class", you can replace it with "they went to the same class". So pay more attention to the type of tenses that you use when you retold a story. Good luck for the midterm test stela !
ReplyDeleteThank you for the advice. yes, I think I should pay more attention to it next time. Good luck on your test too :) GBU
DeleteYour past story reminds me about my past. Yeah, I used to be a lazy student.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, Stella, I've seen that you have potential in writing. Before you write something, try to imagine that you're going to draw something beautiful and you have to add some brand-new vocabularies in order to beautify it. I believe in the future, you will be an excellent writer!
Thank you for your advice, I am really appreciate it
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